All Comments on 'Behind the Swing'

Loved it Great suspense! Well written

This was unique to me. I can’t figure if I would read a sequel. The entire story was a lesson in a lack of communication with her husband. In that view it was definitely cheating.

Even though there was no sexual activity, it was definitely erotic to her. I think until she confides in her husband this will eventually evolve into a sexual experience.

I didn’t like enough to give more than 3 stars.

Bill S.

Brilliant !

That's a powerful story, sexy and exciting...

This is an excellent and provocative story, beautifully told and really well written.

She is a rotten cheater nothing more! How will she explain the welts on her ass to the husband? Divorce is the prise for the betrayal!!

I found myself constantly pulled out of this story by the strange use of scare quotes. It is unusual to put scare quotes/irony quotes around "city" "website" and "the." Does her husband not really work in a city? If you are looking for emphasis use italics. If I wrote that this "story" was ok, you would rightly read that I didn't think it justified the title of story. If I said this "erotic" story, you would rightly read that it wasn't erotic. A bit of editing and this story would be awesome.

Interesting scene. Well written. Hopefully, we will be privy to "lesson 2"

Not enough explanation as to what was the background for Amanda's "exploration"