All Comments on 'Being Brave'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 7 years ago
Hot little erotic vignette!

Great quick sketch - like a charcoal study in preparation of a larger painting. As grand as the final frescoes might be, still there is sometimes more character in the original gesture drawings. Nice piece of writing. Thanks for sharing. *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The best I've read so far. Beautiful.

This? This is raw and authentic. I'm hearing a woman's story, as if it were told to a confidante or written in a diary. It was a real feeling of intimacy for a reader. (Quite a feat, especially in such context.)

I'd love to read more. Keep creating, please! :-)

(A few stragglers of spelling errors were excusable. Content won out; don't sweat it.)

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