All Comments on 'Being My Sister's Sperm Donor Pt. 05'

I’m aware I made a massive blunder with adding the info of the free editing software I use. It wasn’t on the original draft I previewed on here I’m resubmitting this story to try and remove it apologies.

Good story line but you need a proofreader. 4/5

You ruined it imho, The entire Lauren thing is a cop-out, and the Amy bomb only serves some bullshit drama too.

waiting for the next one

Can't wait for the next chapter. Would be nice if Sarah, Amy and Lauren will eventually have foursome with Adam.

Need more Amy and Adam scenes

Awsome !!!, Keep it going!

get the next one coming

Great story and well written. Can't wait to read the final chapter.

next one?

"The final instalment will be released in a couple of weeks."

You dead?

Sorry to all who have been waiting a long time for the final instalment. Had some family issues and haven't been in the right mindset to write anything the final part as well as some new material will be along soon

Oh man , what a great story . That had me really going with love and anxiety. I feel guilty admitting the strong feelings that kept running all through me throughout this story. Love it.