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Interesting story, enjoyed it but thought Pg 5 was not necessary. Maybe a to be continued note would be better, as there is no chapter 2, so far.
Great storyline as usual! I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Tammy and Liz was unexpected so early but not surprising, figured it it might have been later after Dan, then a threesome. But threesome more likely.
The training of Jeff to be a gentleman will be an interesting side story and may lead to some some difficult situations and discussions between Dan and Jeff.
Absolutely beautifully written and I am awaiting the next chapter. I hope that my writing efforts can reach your level of excellence.
Yup! Loved this story as well. I’ll eagerly wait for the next installment.
Bravo! Nice work with Jeff as the McGuffin, distracting us from what was really going on. I found the organic nature of their sexuality and their open relationship very enticing and erotic. I had a relationship very much like that in my first marriage, and the 'other woman' lived with us for almost ten years. Suffice it to say I find this story has more humanity in it than most of the offerings on Literotica. I look forward to how you develop this story with great expectations. Bravo!
Well written. Believable. Can't wait for chapter 2. Sure got my
Juices flowing (and I'm on my 70s)
"As long as your cool, I'd say ...." - Correction - 'you are' is shortened to 'you're'!
So that should be - "As long as you're cool, I'd say ..."
First time I’ve given any type of feedback- nice work looking forward to Chp 2
Really hoping she can take down the arrogant Jeff, know the type and cant stand them. Also hoping Tammy gets some wood working for her as well as some more womanly attention. Nicely done so far.