by ConfusinglyDelerious
Wow. Both sweet and epic. And beautifully written -- so well written about pleasing the woman that I was firmly persuaded that I was reading something written by a woman.
I think this may be the best male first-time story I've read.
Wow. What can I say? All four previous comments were spot on. You obviously proofread your work. This was a pleasure to read. Great description of first time sex where the woman did take charge without being over bearing. She was his teacher when she needed to be, but was savvy enough to let him go on his natural instincts and enjoy the ride. I do hate when the "big cock bs" is added. Sorry gentlemen, but the typical cock is just short of 6 inches. Brag about girth, not length, if you need to brag. Much more realistic.