All Comments on 'Being Used'

I love when authors get straight to the point. Just enough elaboration to give the reader what he needs.

EXCELLENT!!

as I imagine your cunt is.

Loved this one so damn much.

That's an excellent first story Ashes. It's proof that great stories can come from 1000 words or less. It strikes me as a fantasy that you needed to get out of your head. Either way, you definitely have talent. Well done. I hope to see more stories from you.

Nicely done, just enough story to leave us breathless.