All Comments on 'Believe It, or Not'

Why were you crying? Anger or ecstacy?

Well -written, very hot!

Good luck in the contest.

Reminds me of a movie with Nikki Fritz in it. Ghost lover or something. Different title overseas. Thank You very arousing

Great Story! Very well written.

This is an amazing story! It totally captivated me. I love it! Most definetly one of my favorites!

I absolutely loved this story. May well be your best work. Good luck in the contest!

my balls are empty......mmmmmmm

This was the best Halloween story I read this year! In my opinion, you should have won. Great story and keep up the fantastic writing!

great storytelling.

at last year's private halloween party, my wife played the exact role imagined in your story, except for real. on cue from the hostess, she stripped off, leant against a table, and pretended to be taken by an unseen ghost. everyone gathered behind her to enjoy the spectacular view up between her legs while she spread herself and stroked her clit against the edge of the table until she came, all whilst the host provided humourous commentary about the invisible ghost and my wife's very visible nude body and her orgasm. after we got home she told me she was so turned on that she's considering doing the same thing this year and then inviting all the men to actually fuck her whilst she's still spread.

i'll have to think long and hard about that. having everyone see her naked and performing solo sex is one thing, but watching a dozen or so men line up and really fuck her is a thing we haven't tried before. every few weeks she mentions it again, i think she really wants to do it and even talks about a rehearsal or a live practice session before the event, with perhaps not all of the men but maybe just five or six so she'd know if she could really do it with the entire crowd. for now i'd rather wait and see how we both feel about it when the time comes. but at present, i'm rather leaning toward doing this, especially if she will allow me to be last in line so i can be inside her when she's freshy filled and dripping with so much cum. maybe this could be a good thing after all.