All Comments on 'Belly Up'

by BarefootMouse1983

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Nick1997Nick19976 months ago

Great Story mouse - You're a real naughty little slut ;)

ArdentHemingwayArdentHemingway6 months ago

Your asked for demeaning comments, but I don't really do that, so it's difficult.

I don't think you deserve a girl like Kalie. She can do better.

wifeswolfwifeswolf6 months ago

Deliciously dirty, erotic and evoking erections....one of the best to masturbate to....cum does have a taste.

DoctorRobertDoctorRobert6 months ago

Fuck that was intense! Truly written by a slut who wants to be seen and used.

TheFrenchReaderTheFrenchReader6 months ago

Naughty a fun read and a devilish author

Rork80Rork806 months ago

I am always impressed when someone takes the time to write a story for Lit and more so when it is hot as hell. Barefoot you are a special slut!

I look forward to the promised pic.

Undacagon_Undacagon_6 months ago

Hmmm an amazingly sexy story

Michael__19Michael__196 months ago

Such a sexy naughty minded slut! Very hot!

Rork80Rork806 months ago

Always impressed when someone takes the time to write a story... Even more impressed wen it is great! Thanks Mouse....

Look forward to the promised pic!

Mike29522Mike295226 months ago

Very hot mouse. Stroking my cock right now thinking of it…

PicklepopperPicklepopper6 months ago

I can't believe you wrote about this. Please don't send me a nude.

HumiliationMan13HumiliationMan136 months ago

An enjoyable read, well done Mouse

ScorpioSevenScorpioSeven6 months ago

Very hot and creamy

Adomguy84Adomguy846 months ago

filthy and slutty like its author

Mike_MadisonMike_Madison6 months ago

Such a little whore. Cheap thrills from a cheap slut

mysticdommysticdom6 months ago

perfect orgy with absolute sluts

mysticdommysticdom6 months ago

perfect orgy with absolute sluts like the author

DandyRandyAndyDandyRandyAndy6 months ago

You're a better writer than George Santos is a Congressmen

BossingBoy88BossingBoy886 months ago

THis was a hot read

SixpixlSixpixl6 months ago

wish I had a slut wife like this to have fun with, or a grateful slut like the author

vampireLoverboyvampireLoverboy6 months ago

You are such a filthy whore… you deserve to fucked hard over n over again…

Used and abused in every way imaginable… I would take you roughly from behind and make you cumm hard! & Then imma punish you for enjoying it.

Whore

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

amazing story by a bombshell author. incredible body. she got me to show her my cock and kept mentioning how gorgeous it was. "a big beautiful cock with a beautiful bend"

Tosspot1Tosspot16 months ago

Wow..you dirty slut..made me hard and made me cum

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Such a naughty story. Loved it when mommy watches and encourages. Would love a naughty mom like that

Depressed_but_hornyDepressed_but_horny6 months ago

You might be worthless, but your work isn't.

NudePantyhoseNudePantyhose6 months ago

You're such a fucking slut. Rather bitchy for a person like you on your knees commanding others to do your bidding. Such a whore.

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You see, writing is very sexual to me. It should feel like making love, in my opinion. Not some spit on it and stick it in kind of fucking, mind you as we barely found time to get your pants down around your ankles. That's for the supposed superior male poets with the littl...