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All Comments on 'Ben the Bored Billionaire Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wish it was longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Story is going good. Keep writing ✍

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story. You just need a proof reader, a spell checker, and a grammar checker.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

Where do you find your editors? Either you're asking people to intentionally do a really bad job at it, or you're asking illiterates to do it. Of course, you wouldn't notice they're illiterate. You obviously can't write, so I assume you can't read either.

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I Am not a writer by any means. I think of myself as a storyteller, that gets lost in the details of my stories. I have an overactive imagination and a head full of ideas. So you never know what I’ll come up with next. I won’t stick to one Category I’ll move around depending o...