All Comments on 'Beneath the Ice Ch. 06'

The story has begun to drag a bit in this chapter, even given the tension with the sister. Nothing major, but I hope things pick up soon.

Marvelous!

5

Really excellent, especially the Gretzky quote.

Love this chapter. Liked the unexpected appearance of the sister. looking forward to dinner with the sister and Christmas with Alexei!

I thought it was one of the best chapters yet. I like this story the best of all your stories. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Still one of the most enjoyable stories currently running on Literotica. Love the story and the characters. Thank you.

I'm glad the sister popped up. It paves the way for development of Charlotte's family dynamics. Alexei is a wonderful cinnamon roll of a boyfriend.

I suppose that this chapter was mundane, but it was "necessary" to show that the relationship between Alexi and Charlotte was "ordinary.

I think 'good girl' has a lot of potential. Her family, not so much.

Enjoyed your writing. Hope you find your Alexi