All Comments on 'Beneath the Machine'

This was a great short story! I'd be interested (and happy) if you were so inclined to flesh it out a bit more. I'm keen to see how Judy and Eve's relationship develops when they start tinkering with Eve's programming together; a lot can happen in six weeks.

please for the love of all that is holy post more, this was great

I'd like to see a sequel to where she submits fully

Good one. A tad on the dangerous side. I'd like to read the conversation she has with her mother as to why the settings on the robot are what they are.

really good, I like your take on the robot stuff. I kinda agree.

I was surprised by ludicolo though. Made me chuckle. I definitely didn't expect to see that face here lol.

it would have been more interesting if it was a nerdy boy looking more girly than a girl.

Wow, this story was so hot! Though I feel you glossed over the sexiest part of the story: Judy seeing Eve wearing a suimsuit and realizing she has a cock! What was she wearing? A bikini? Maybe a one piece? You HAVE to write that prequel, at least as a 750 word challenge.

I love this one so much! Especially how cute they are together.

Is there a Chapter two where Judy starts to become a Rubberist?

Does she ask Eve about a Rubberist Maid Catsuit Uniform?

I think there should be more I really enjoyed it

The premise is wonderful, especially the mention of the EVE unit having a "personality" with her own preferences. The only thing that really seemed like a problem was when using 'Eve' in place of 'Judy' during the dominatrix moment, had to reread the sentence to realize it was an error. The 'I, Robot"/"Positronic Man" idea with set guidelines for operation was impressive and a nice touch