All Comments on 'Beneficially HIS Ch. 03'

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impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Worth the wait!

A toast! To gooooooooooood friends ... and birthday celebrations. ~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I certainly hope

we don't have to wait for another birthday celebration to find this foursome together again! sizzle, baby....sizzle!

keep on keepin on, im hooked!

*hugs*

v~

sacksackover 19 years ago
Continues the excellent quality....

of the first two chapters! Very erotic and tantilizing! Hot,hot, hot! A must read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You knew

I'd love it.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 19 years ago
Great stuff!

Dialogue and pace is wonderful - I'm always impressed by writers who can do dialogue well. My favorie line: just made for sucking…no wonder guys love tits…

I had a similar revelation long ago, which this line brought to mind!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Surprise!

Happy birthday indeed! This story is full of surprises and I enjoyed reading it.

Wondering what will happen when Bill is back. LOL

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
Well,

this just keeps getting better and better. Yes, you have to continue. That's an order.

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
Well,

this just keeps getting better and better. Yes, you have to continue. That's an order.

SensualCealySensualCealyover 19 years ago
WOWSA!!!

Loved it Mrs. Keep up the great work, it definately struck every nerve I could think of. Kept me busy Friday afternoon too! ;)

I hear there is a birthday in June, maybe you could write a second series related to that, dont forget to invite the neighbours!

Cealy

analisgr8analisgr8almost 19 years ago
It just gets better

Thanks keep up the awesome work!!!!!

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