All Comments on 'Benoit Holdings'

Definitely a good start. Can't wait to see what else you come up with as they continue with their punishment.

Like the plot and Your balanced and well-paced writing stile. If You came up with that on Your own, congrats. Looking forward for more exciting and entertaining stories.

Hope it was not a one time lucky strike. Just apply the demonstrated imagination and feeling for composition and appropriate style balance on more genres and themes.

Though could use some editing. But that mere technique and sweat time.

All the best

A few spelling and grammatical errors, but all in all, a very erotic story. I could see this being a stand alone, but I really hope there are more chapters outlining the breaking of these two that deserve what they get.