All Comments on 'Ben's Big Mistake'

Five stars for dramatic tension up until the reveal.

Very hot! I especially liked the internal dialog with his dick; made the whole thing feel all the more intimate.

5 Stars and a favorite! What a fun read. Loved the twist, too. Well done!

I didn't see that twist coming. Awesome though!

Apparently I read this before, but, short term memory being what it is, I didn't remember. This time I took note of some of the lines that made this immensely entertaining. Here they are.

The reason why walks into my office.

When cock and reason collide, it's usually best to listen to reason.

What's she wearing underneath? my cock wants to know.

And I peer down at where her nipples are looking back.

At this point I have to make a decision. Or rather, at this point I can still back out. My decision's already made.

It always feels awkward to be kneeling down in your naked arse before you actually get to do something with your cock.

Robert says... Never mind what Robert says.

Love it! Well written, engaging, surprise twist, sexy as hell.

I usually don't pick random stories with ratings in the low 4s, but I had a mysterious feeling that I would like it -- sooo glad I did!