All Comments on 'Berlin'

Vivid imagery.. i can’t comprehend a relationship like this, though your story helps. The plot is hot, and gut wrenching. Great writing overall.

You really should tell more about what she did at the club

I looked at all your titles and it seems like they should be in group sex or slut stories. I didn’t read a single one of them based on your description of the stories.

Too much preamble I think, and not enough detail of the gang-bang.