All Comments on 'Berserker: Captive of a Viking Ch. 03'

by lottieH

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wonderful!

Sooo captivating! Please go on and post another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Eager to read the next chapter

More please, the sooner, the better.

Thanks for posting!

bad_girl69bad_girl69about 14 years ago
GREAT!

I honestly love this story. It just gets better and better!! Please write the next chapter(s) fast! I dont want to wait! hahaha

JustWant2FuckJustWant2Fuckabout 14 years ago
This is Great

You have to write some more because this is some pretty good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Story

I love this story! I hope we get to see Francine behaving less like a pouting tantrum throwing little girl and more like a woman. Asegill is dreamy....

Keep Writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love your Story!!

Thanks for the great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!! I love it!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 14 years ago
Really enjoying this!!

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great work

You've set up the beginnings of a great story, now you have the challenge of coming up with a creative way to let the characters grow but still have some kind of conflict/challenge. Looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More please

Please continue the story and post again soon!

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 14 years ago
Waiting...

Are you planning to submit the rest of this story? I've really enjoyed it and I'd really like to read the rest.

jmags77jmags77almost 14 years ago
Eager for more...

You've got a fan in me! I love these characters and can't wait to see what comes next. I almost felt cheated when I realized I'd come to the end of the 3rd chapter already. Please don't stop the story here. Wonderful storyline... and, well I'm excited for the adventure and power play between the hero & heroine. Great stuff! Love it!

rosamundirosamundiover 13 years ago
Lottie! PLEASE add at least one more chapter...

Seriously, you are one of the best writers here, and this is a great story. We deserve at least one more chapter. :)

The offer to edit stands.

callalily2170callalily2170over 13 years ago
THIS IS AWESOME

ARE YOU PUBLISHED YET?

XxsuperflychickxXXxsuperflychickxXover 13 years ago
OMG!

i actually NEED more!!!!! .....or else i might just come and stalk you and force you to write more ^_^ lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Abandoned project

I really hope you haven't abandoned this. It has so much potential. I am looking forward to you next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MOAR!

Please, please, please, write more! This story has so much potential, and you really can't leave an audience hanging just before the wedding night!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY

I love this story so far...I hope you will continue writing it,please don't leave it like this...definately one of the best I've read...I would hate to see it abandoned...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Adding my plea...

.... don't let it hang!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Very good story...with great potential for more

BigCoreySKRBigCoreySKRabout 13 years ago
please

Let there be more. It's so hard to find good stories involving Vikings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

please keep going!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

More please x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Update!?

Where is your update? Thought you said that chapter 4 was ready LAST year!

Irish_LassIrish_Lassalmost 13 years ago
I like it!

It rather reminds me of a book that I read a while ago but only loosely and enough to make me want to read more. So my next question is when will there be a post??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

More please....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more please!

this is absolutely wonderful. please please please write more.

grrlslavegrrlslaveover 10 years ago
Good story

Well done!

interweb88interweb88over 10 years ago
this is really good

I found this story by chance and I really like you should write more like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

FYI, the 'head of a ship' is the toilet. The bow is the front end and the stern is the back end. If you are going to write nautical stories, please get your terms straight or risk losing your readership.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Do what?

I can't believe commentators were giving this author crap over historical accuracy, in a genre clearly labeled science FICTION and FANTASY.

I've read this several times now, and it always captures my imagination and whimsy.

LottieH, I hope one day you pick this story up again. I would love to read more!

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