by lottieH
More please, the sooner, the better.
Thanks for posting!
I honestly love this story. It just gets better and better!! Please write the next chapter(s) fast! I dont want to wait! hahaha
You have to write some more because this is some pretty good stuff
I love this story! I hope we get to see Francine behaving less like a pouting tantrum throwing little girl and more like a woman. Asegill is dreamy....
Keep Writing!
Thanks for the great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!! I love it!
You've set up the beginnings of a great story, now you have the challenge of coming up with a creative way to let the characters grow but still have some kind of conflict/challenge. Looking forward to it.
Are you planning to submit the rest of this story? I've really enjoyed it and I'd really like to read the rest.
You've got a fan in me! I love these characters and can't wait to see what comes next. I almost felt cheated when I realized I'd come to the end of the 3rd chapter already. Please don't stop the story here. Wonderful storyline... and, well I'm excited for the adventure and power play between the hero & heroine. Great stuff! Love it!
Seriously, you are one of the best writers here, and this is a great story. We deserve at least one more chapter. :)
The offer to edit stands.
i actually NEED more!!!!! .....or else i might just come and stalk you and force you to write more ^_^ lol
I really hope you haven't abandoned this. It has so much potential. I am looking forward to you next chapter.
Please, please, please, write more! This story has so much potential, and you really can't leave an audience hanging just before the wedding night!
I love this story so far...I hope you will continue writing it,please don't leave it like this...definately one of the best I've read...I would hate to see it abandoned...
Let there be more. It's so hard to find good stories involving Vikings.
Where is your update? Thought you said that chapter 4 was ready LAST year!
It rather reminds me of a book that I read a while ago but only loosely and enough to make me want to read more. So my next question is when will there be a post??
this is absolutely wonderful. please please please write more.
I found this story by chance and I really like you should write more like this
FYI, the 'head of a ship' is the toilet. The bow is the front end and the stern is the back end. If you are going to write nautical stories, please get your terms straight or risk losing your readership.
I can't believe commentators were giving this author crap over historical accuracy, in a genre clearly labeled science FICTION and FANTASY.
I've read this several times now, and it always captures my imagination and whimsy.
LottieH, I hope one day you pick this story up again. I would love to read more!