All Comments on 'Best Business Trip Ever Ch. 02'

Good premise.

Sex still too automatic. Too rushed. Too mechanical.

No seduction of either of them at all.

Three stars.

This is a great story, with wonderful characters, that really needs to be continued. The romantic atmosphere is marvelous, and the love scenes are well-written, and really add depth to the development of the plot. Five stars.

Actually, one of those "Anonymous" comments is wrong. Sometimes it really is like that. Usually, for me it was when I was younger and the woman was older, but it did happen even quicker than described. So it was a five for me...

Perfect for me!

Is Maya available in between your trips to London?

And/Or Fiona?

Good that Maya came back for some one on one. Didn't seem rushed or automatic to me but lots of teasing followed by very satisfying sex for both. More?

Cheers, Andy

I think this was even better than the first part.