All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 04'

I enjoyed this latest installment, even though I don't think you should end it there, at least make a little epilouge for the characters. But since you are the author, you know when it is best to end your story. I must say good job, I like reading it and the characters was good (even though, I still don't fully like Kevin). The sex scene between Jae and Bryan was simply hot, even though the pull out method was a bit high schoolish to me and when his friend walked in I thought Jae would have told the chick to get bent and back away from her man...lol. But good story

i agree w/ honeybree. I want more...will she say yes. what happens to Keith and Cindy? *Sigh*

great story by the way

enjoyed the story, and the mushy ending, i'm a sucker for those endings so be as mushy as you want, u have a happy reader here :D

It wasn't drawn out or boring, and I loved the ended. Awe, I was like turned on and cracking smiles throughout the story. :) Please keep writing on this story, or write some new ones! I would like love you forever.

it got too rushed at the end. I don't think it was necessary to add the part about Keith and Cindy. The pregnancy was completely unexpected and just didn't fit. Then, it just seemed like the part with the family meeting could have had more substance.

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I still love the story, but kinda disappointed with the ending... Regardless, you are a terrific writer and I look forward to reading your new story.

I really enjoyed this story. The sex was great and I'd love for you to do more. You wrapped up all the loose ends nicely but a longer story would have been even better.

I agree with revelryny.

Why don't you continue this? We still have the proposal, the marriage, etc. I'd also like to see what happens between Keith and Cindy. If you need conflict, why don't you use Bryan's family? We never got to meet them, or to see why he dislikes his father so much. I'm sure that that could fill chapters all by itself. Expound on these issues, and any others you can think of, please.

you should continue this i would read it!

I really loved this story. Great work!!

this story was fantastic. I fell in love with it from the begginning.

How about Keith and Cindy, Bryan's family and Rhia??? Also, Bryan's and Jaelyn's friends??? There are many avenues this story could go-AS LONG AND B & J WERE TOGETHER IN THE END!!!!!

this story was amazing! you definatley need 2 continue

I love this romantic love story, keep writing for us :>)

please continue

L.ovely story. I especially like that Kieth had some redeming qualities. Although I admire that he wants to take responsibilties of his child ; I would still advise a DNA test. Cindi is not the most reliable character.

As for Jae and Bri... living good is the best revenge. I like that they were friends first before they became lovers. And the sex scenes were wonderly and tenderly written. Great writing and a great story.

Karma is really kicking Keith in the ass, but can he be sure that he was the only dude that Cindy was having unprotected sex with? But I am glad that he apologized to Cindy for his treatment even a ho deserves some respect.

Too cute. Bryan was way awesome.

Keith will need one! Lol

Loved this story but its so cruel to end like that

I'm in love....

Please PLEEEASE DO AN EPILOGUE!! THIS IS THE MOST PERFECT STORY IVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE OMG GOD SERIOUSLY THIS STORY IS DO PERFECT PLEASE I WANNA KNOW IF THEY HAD KIDS AND STUFF LIKE THAT :'(

Good story but a really cruel writer lol. Loved it but so mean to end it like that.

Love how everyone is redeemed in the end, and the guys get a (more than a) little emotional maturity!

I know you're probably not on this site anymore, but I honestly wish you had skipped ahead to the wedding day, or at least New Year's Eve! Their story is so sweet! Although, I do think Jaelyn was a bit rough on the man who, basically, fought for her honor because he was so in love with her. Other than that, though, I loved it, and would have loved to have read her reaction, or how they looked on their wedding day. Maybe even how Keith and Cindy were as parents. Still a really sweet story, though. I loved it!

I absolutely fell in love with your story. The writing is great. The way you made the story emotional while simultaneously keeping it sexy as hell, is to be praised. Thank you. While I am sad that it's over I do like the ending. I like the conversation between Jae and her family(specifically her mom) too. That's a really sweet moment. I also really loved the way you built up the story. Every time I read a chapter I was so enthralled I had to read more. I think you're a great writer and I hope you continue to write! :) -a happy & satisfied reader ;)