All Comments on 'Best Friend's Daughter'

This is a good story. However, it is more of two stories. The timeline is a little confusing. I know it could be continued but even so the story just stops.

That was great - please continue.

Hmmm... I agree with the others, the ending is abrupt and feels unfinished. You've left plenty of room to tack on another chapter or three, but have given no sign of that intention. It might be interesting to see how his friends react to his relationship with their daughter, who is 26 or 27 years his junior; is this a case of fuck-buddies for the weekend, or is there a relationship developing? Might be worth exploring? 4 stars, another chapter or two could bring it up.

Nice story. Very believable and romantically erotic.

I could almost feel her breasts. That’s a 5 from me, even if the ending was a little abrupt. Thank you for writing this.

Well played and well done. Excellent storytelling.

Very much enjoyed this.

I agree with just about everyone else, great story, but its not done!

A really nice story until the end. Down to 3 stars for the crappy ending.

Sweet and hot story, but the ending was abrupt. 4*

5. Good story, but I felt the ending went over a cliff. Just my feelings. Easy to continue this with part 2.

All old guys need a Kayla. Great story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Cheers. Frankie