by NaughtyMindedGirl
Personally, I thought it was a great story. I love forced sex that turns enjoyable in the end.
Some phrases were on the trite side, as if from a first time writer. But your story pace, buildup and dialog were great. After reading this, I hope there are 2nd and 3rd parts, maybe more. Very hot and would like to see where this story goes.
Ohh my goodness. That is such a hot story. I loved when you came, and the way you described it.
You have to record your stories in audio. They are amazing! I love all of them!