by Jim4got
A fantasy, yes. Imagine the local news headlines if this fantasy were ever to cross the line into reality. It would be on Court TV, talked about ad infinitum on Larry King & possibly Oprah. I could imagine the promos now. "Not even your grandmother is safe from the male libido---today at 4"
Or if the husband got wind of it. The paper would read: "Peeping Tom Popped Off by Grandpop" or in a more earthy tabloid: "Neighbor's Cock Cooked As Grandpop Finds IT In Grandma's Pot"
Totally unbelievable. Sounded like the fantasy of a stalker or rapist.
I agree with the critique relative to stalking and rape, and I'm the author! I'll keep it in mind in the future. Interestingly, I complained about the same thing re/ Non consentual, Truth or Dare by Sabineteas.
Don't beat yourself up over one story keep trying
Pick other subjects you have a fantasy for and keep going.
Thank you for the effort.
PT
You made her sound like an old bag and made you sound like a 13 year old wimp turned into Ted Bundy. You prove the point that fantasies do not make good stories.
Not sure whether this was a fantasy of yours about your next door MILF, or you were actually fucking her.
There is no way you can sneak into someones house and screw them without them even opening their eyes.
All the comments are valid. The best point was that it was a fantasy. If you were upset that this story may have been a bit unbelievable then I would suggest another site that caters to non fiction stories. This one was just fine for this site.
I lived in an apartment building sharing the same floor with four neighbours whom are married with children. Intentionally, I had made known to my next door neighbour that my wife walks around naked in our apartment all day long and are constantly horny and hungry for a good long fuck. I also revealed to him that the main door to our unit is left unlocked at all times. As expected, a day after, he came by my place and gave my wife a good hard fucking while I was at work. It has been slightly over a year now and I am surprised at how words got around caused not only the men on the same floor but also those living above and below us are enjoying my wife hot cunt. At times, they fuck her in groups. As for me, it really turns me on to hear from her all the details of the enjoyable fuck she had while I was at work. The sight of another men's spunk oozing out of her well used cunt makes me want to fuck and cum in her hard and strong. To all my neighbours, thank you for all the mind blowing fuck which my hot wife truly deserved.
Jim4got; Man you have a great STORY telling ability.Made me very anxious to read your tale.Have fun okdeacon The person who left the comment about his wife being fucked by all the neighbor men on 3 floors I give a 100 plus 5 stars.That story made my peter ache.Man where do you live? Lucky Dog is all I can say .EVERYBODY HAVE FUN okdeacon
For someone of some talent to have wasted it on this childish fodder is surprising - or not - given what else is here on occasion.
It didn't quack like a duck but resembled more a dilinquent dodo. However, one persons viewpoint can be imaged here whether it is any good or not.
How old are you?
Maybe one day soon old husband will be behind that door with his shotgun.
So this character had nothing to do with his life but just stare in her bedroom window morning, noon and night? He saw the husband and her making love and then he questions whether she´s been havivg sex? I only read like half the story but I couldn´t anymore.