by travellux
"Part 2 to follow."
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.
Caesar’s Palace? Really? He couldn’t take her to a nicer hotel like the Bellagio or the Palms?
It is a 5 from me this is a good story with only a few spelling mistakes, so well done.
"It is a 5 from me this is a good story with only a few spelling mistakes, so well done."
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So, if it was a great -- not good, great -- story with no mistakes, it would earn the same rating? Really? 5 should NOT be the default rating. This is a good example of why the ratings on this site are bullshit.
I just love a good love filled / sex filled story like this one .
You did a great job.