All Comments on 'Best Spring Ever Ch. 10'

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mybikecruisesmybikecruisesover 3 years ago
Better

Better but Hilda is still really planning on cheating on the rules already. She told naive Dennis don't work about the rules, I'll get it how I want it with you. The 4 kids are leaving for college in 2 months at most, the families are either going to be polygamous or broken totally with Dennis and Hilda and Richard and Julia, with the girls pissed at all men because of Richard and Dennis when it is actually Hilda being the conniving bitch all the time

DocWordsDocWordsover 3 years agoAuthor

@mybimecruises - Thanks for the comments. I’ve enjoyed your observations and thoughts. Who knows what could happen? The spring is over.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 3 years ago

@ mybikecruises, You got it! Remember it was Hilda that invented the rules and then kept manipulating Richard into changing them so she and Dennis could have more alone time together All along convincing Richard it was his idea.

Oh well, it was a fantasy. A convoluted one but Hilda and Dennis lived happily ever after and it was all Richards idea.

Glad to see Richard finally got to fuck Julia plus a couple BJ's!

Cheers

SAGE

FulboFulboabout 3 years ago
ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY INCREDIBLE...

I've never ever read anything on hear that was so vivid and detailed.

That was an incredibly written story.

Thank you for sharing,

Greg

bluerowdybluerowdyover 2 years ago

Hilda needs to be put in her place. A true conniving bitch, she has maneuvered her husband to have what she wants, Dennis. I am disliking Dennis and Hilda more all the time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too long and I have been bored. Stopped reading after the first few lines. sorry

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