All Comments on 'Best Trip Ever'

would like to read more about your adventures...

"Flesh" it out a little..

All that build for lazy writing and rushed story tellin!

The story had interesting potential, but then just fizzled out.

I enjoyed reading this and I really liked the scenario. I think once he gets her into the house it would a better story if you went more slowly through the sexual interactions. They seem quite quick for such a good build up of story.

But nicely thought out. Have you thought of continuing this?

Pretty ridiculous story - if she’s happily married what on Earth is she thinking of?