by flashgordon562006
Call me selfish, but I'd enjoy watching her with another woman, and if she wants to watch me with another woman, of course I'd do it, but no way do I want her with another man,
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BTW, I think this belongs in Fetish. Water Sports and Adult Breast Feeding are both fetishes, and were major parts of this story.
I feel sorry for the daughter of these two fuckups. She'll be lucky to have an even semi-normal life after being raised by this pimp and ho combination.
Disgusting.
Next installment you'll have him eating creampies and getting sloppy seconds as his place in their marriage.
And these pieces of shit procreated? Even in your fantasy world that's a tragedy.
Save us all any more of having to read this crap.
FlashGordon, I find it disappointing that you/moderator(s) chose not to publish my comment on your story. If you found my remarks regarding golden showers as primarily un-erotic too brutal then may I humbly suggest that both you author and/or the moderators of the LW sub-genre make better decisions on placing these GS themed tales in the Fetish sub-genre where they obviously belong. The result will be far less criticisms from readers like myself for incorrect genre allocation.
Very hot story. I agree with the others here, this begs for a sequel.
5-stars.