All Comments on 'Bet Gone Bad'

Good story, I liked it. It did turn quite quickly from reluctance though. Would love to read more from you.

Thank you! Pacing is an area I'd like to work on, so I'll definitely keep that in mind for the future :)

Please keep writing!

Well, I wonder when we will find out what kind of bet is going bad. Unless I missed something in this short chapter, it just seems that there is a guy and girl making out, and ....???

good first story, but i was confused at first where he put it till i saw it was in her ass. No birth control needed for that!

Wow, Hot as Hell first story, but what was the Bet she lost? Hopefully you'll tell us in the next chapter.

Great story, really well written. Keep up the good work!

I love how even though she gives in, she still feels humiliated and has little control over the situation. Great job on your first story!