All Comments on 'Bet Your Ass'

Dafuq?

Hi,

Just wanted you to know that it was and is a sexy story. Can't wait until she returns some of the 'favors'.

Nice job.

Santacruzman

Pretty unlikable characters with a couple of dumb names. Usually a husband and a wife playing games can be funny or entertaining. This was neither and the dialogue was especially mundane. Maybe you should stick to your usual categories. The LW section can be especially difficult. This wasn't a good read at any level.

1 star

boring as shit 2*

I quit half way as it is difficult following who is speaking and who is not, who is me and who is female..Rene is identified as a male but called a she when walking away from Ethan,,Get your storyline cleaned up, proofread and edited.