All Comments on 'Beth - A Glorious Epiphany'

well done. Good husband, but he has opened Pandora's Box, and is in for a ride. Can he handle it?

Dr beulahthemick; Excellent beginning, a kind, generous husband, what a lucky girl, enjoy it while you can.

Excellent composition and titillating buildup! Grammar quite good, although I did spot a few typos. Keep up the great work - I love the characters and energy displayed. Looking forward to more!

Great story, looking forward to what happened next.

Appreciate everyone's feedback so far, thank you. I'm developing / editing a second story featuring Beth and Jake which will serve as a stepping stone to a much longer, fuller story involving multiple partners. Can't wait to share.