All Comments on 'Beth's Family Ch. 01'

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stevie1965stevie1965over 5 years ago
enjoyable start to a series

good first story for this series, a couple of typos and grammar issues that your editor could help out with. Otherwise, looking forward to next instalment.

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Jack's Being Nimble***

Nice start looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for sharing.

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