All Comments on 'Betrayal'

Not much of a wrap up

Weak story. It just sputtered to a dull end.

Should have texted mystery man to come over. Knock him out, chain them both up (but not touching each other), then leave.

Needs another chapter.

Sure hope this isn't a one off story leaving us hanging. Pretty good so far. But why didn't he follow though with his plan to fuck her with the big butt plug? She had crossed over the line with fucking "WORK"! So he should have fucked her pussy with that big ass butt plug, then left it stuck in with pussy (with cuff keys inside her pussy), like a dog who had knotted his bitch! Now he will need to go get tested for STDs, who knows what WORK is carrying. As he was getting ready to leave, he put her phone between her perfect Breast, telling to call WORK to set her free, using "Siri" to call him..

I agree "Koxok" text "WORK" to come over right away to fuck him up. As story is Written now "WORK" gets away with no Consequences and gets the girl too. That's BS, there should have been some kind of revenge on him!!

“Sure hope this isn't a one off story leaving us hanging. Pretty good so far. But why didn't he follow though with his plan to fuck her with the big butt plug?”

Because she will accuse him of rape and ruin his life? He has no alibi and he would be raping her.