All Comments on 'Betrayal Pt. 03'

I like all your stories keep it up.

I have read the story and liked it very much. I liked the characters and the interaction between them. 5* Thanks for your time and imagination.

Peckerheads, couldn't stop laughing

I thought he might end up with Ellie, but it all worked out well. Five star romance.

What a great story with a nice ending. I'm glad it worked out with Kat!

Thanks for sharing.

Loved the story, the characters, the dialog... everything. 5* all the way.

Totally agree with Mushyguy.

I consider one Favorite per thousand views to be the benchmark. Pt. 03 doubled that, as did Pt. 01.

Kudos.

R410a is a refrigerant used in residential and commercial (not automotive) air conditioning systems. So, why was it chosen as a moniker?

Just curious.

Paul in Oklahoma

I really like your writing, you take the time to develop the characters and tell an interesting story.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for being a great author!

Great story. I totally enjoyed reading it.

Darn good, and interesting handle (what caught my eye to your stories) as I have my R410 Cert & 608/609 licenses, worked for Copeland designing Scrolls/Recips. I liked your story series...

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6*, Hooyah, Salutes...

Damn near perfect!!! 5+++/5!

I love the story in it's entirety, AAAAAA++++++

First off. I made a mistake in my comment after your first chapter, saying that I was anxious to read your next chapter soon. Then I went up to the start, And saw that you already had them written. Duuu. I have just finished your story, and enjoyed every chapter. Keep up the good work.

Excellent story, it's hard to say which one that I've read is the best. I do know though that all of them so far are so far above any other authors I've read that there's no comparison. I'm on my way down the list to start the next one. Keep up the good work.

I love that Brianna said she wanted to wait until her kids were grown, then though he should wait.

I am sorry, but why she wait for her to be ready, if he is ready, go for it.

GREAT STORY!!! LIKE THE BRIANNA SCENE, PUTTING THAT BABYMAKER IN HER PLACE!!

5*s, for the writing... the story,.. eh. Still some editing issues but few and far between.

Thanks for sharing though.

Nice! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Good story. Editing needed. But, editing doesn’t solve grammar problems when the author apparently doesn’t understand the rules.

Really good story!

To Anonymous - if you don't like the grammar on a free story on Internet, feel free to edit it and send a fixed version to the author. Or just STFU.

Thanks for creating and sharung another wonderful series.

I loved how Kat put Dorthy in her place AND compassionately helped her find a PI in order to deal with her cheating husband. Kat is quite a woman.

Like all of your others, a grate story. I'm running out of stories. You better get to work righting more. I'm so spoiled I refuse to read stories from others.

Regardless of the negative committee's. Keep on writing your great stories 10 stars

5* because MC was better off with Kat!!

The encounter with bitch Brianna was great BUT WTF name their first son Brian!!!!!

How did Kat's bitch mother find them - 130 was too much!!!

I like your work. And this is a good story. You seem to have your characters hold off on the loving. Not sure what the goal is maybe make it more meaningful?

The girl is often. Not ready, but there does not seem to be a event or change that makes her ready. It baffles me slightly . Anyhow good work.

Wonderful, 10 stars! Ernie got his and Kat had 5 kittens!

This is the best series I’ve read so far!!! Kudos! Pls keep writing!!!