All Comments on 'Betrayed Pt. 03'

Great story but too short. It needs more seduction and sex. And a little mother /daughter lesbianism would have been great.

And please do a revenge gone wrong on Lucas. The guys want revenge but it bit them back.

What if the person reuniting all of those guys was actually Lucas, about to give them yet another dose of humiliation?

That would sooooo be something that PurpleMonkeyDishwash would do... I have no idea how exactly he'll manage to prevent Lucas from, at least, getting the vicious beatdown he so richly deserves... But I've already stop expecting any true payback will happen around here!

Better know your writer, people. You better all expect some 'schadenfreude'... just not on the right character.

that would be fucking hilarious and so twisted and erotic. Please Purple, do this for us.

I hope Lucas wins

i have to cum for this big prick

Suggest that after Lucas has collected a nice list of MILd's, suggest he returns to visit them for more fun in his post college years.

5 Stars.

When is Part four coming out?

Honestly I'm really wanting a proper revenge. No plot twist where Lucas wins.

Honestly after all the shit he has done, I definitely want justice for the guys that got played by him. And Lizzie deserves some payment too for her shit.

Please give some proper vengeance. No point in making it a revenge story if it just gonna end in Lucas winning. If that were to be the case then there would he no need for the revenge sideplot

Great story and very erotic as well as humorous. Very well written

We already know that there will be at least 2 more parts: first telling of his exploits in his senior, and then hopefully the revenge. Kind of bummed out you haven't already finished it. Anyway, these stories are a bit outrageous. I can buy the first story, and even humor your second story. This one however, I've yet to ever run across a mother that acts so ill-willed towards her child. A sister, MAYBE, but doubtful in the way explained. Also, if they're so hot, how are they single? Kinda far fetched.