All Comments on 'Betsy - Reawakened Ch. 03'

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

The agony of waiting

Ran across your writing last year and LOVE the ongoing story of Ann and Neil. The new story of Betsy is great too. Will have to start Ann all over again as I await more chapters to either story. Great story telling!

Thank you!

maddoggonzo almost 5 years ago

Now this is the real start

Loved the first two Chapters, but this really raises the bar, so much building of the foundations for a really strong tale. Just the last few paragraphs put the timeline into focus and just hangs there waiting for more...

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Updated 12/27/23: Hello again readers. As I stated in the previous update, writing has resumed, along with some editing. I'm currently writing chapter 30 of Betsy. Once I get done with that this week, I need to write at least two chapters of Ann that I've charted so as not los...

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