All Comments on 'Better Off Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is hot and I want to know more!

Seems like there are a lot of moving parts here I can't wait to see just who is pulling whose strings! Navanthe seems sus as fuck but Nabi is clearly still in the game! I can't wait to see how this all plays out in the end. Sherri seems seductive as fuck in her own right which makes me wonder just how seductive Victoria was before this all began.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So interesting! Can’t wait for a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very good

Ooof, things look bad for Katie. I guess she's going to spend a lot of time rubbing herself in the next months.

Glad to see that you are back with a new saga. For the time being looks darker than the other one.

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