All Comments on 'Better than Before'

A story where there is no cheating? The husband and wife loving each other? What a pleasant sight.

Bears repeating — you bring a vivid imagination to your fine writing. Enjoyed reading your earlier pieces — one poignantly erotic, the other quite humorous (at least for me). This piece enjoys the same unusualness while I still try to reconcile her dance “class” with TV images. Guess that is my problem to enjoy/ponder. Keep sharing.

Not sure if she really enjoyed trying to help him or if she just enjoyed reaming his butt.

No "extra-marital fun?" Sounds like Romance to me.

The talent is there, I like the originality, the story starts goods, builds up, and then kind of wanders off. For those of us simpletons who like a complete story with everything wrapped up nicely, somethings missing. Still a good read, for 2 whole minutes......

Okay, that's a new one. Pretty good take on a silver lining. Although I've never thought of Rag Doll as a stripper song before, I guess it fits the situation.

Good story!

4

Wrong category, terrible storyline, uncomfortable feeling

Well that was just plain dumb

And should I be the one to inform the anon below that this might not have been a "loving" wife? I think someone needs to reread this trash.

It read more like the usual mentally ill horse shit of a woman just using a man. So, the writer must be one of those south of M/D line misogynists.

Her regrets of bad fucking before the accident doesn't make any sense; that's who she married. If he fucks better now, great, but that's icing. If he can impregnate her she better take it, his walking or rolling. The accident could have just as easily happened after children had been born; what then?

A good effort, but her mental meandering was somewhat off putting. Still, thanks for the effort.

anal fingering? Guess she married a British beta.

Please don't write any more stories until you take a creative writing course. This was just awful.

3 stars! A nice attempt.

Bill S.