All Comments on 'Better Than Coffee'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well done!

Excellent work on this one! Really nice job bringing the reader into the story; you painted the picture really nicely. I'm usually not a fan of the 'me and you' narrative style but this worked really well. Really gets the mental pictures going; again, great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Morning

very hot, first time the character didn't cum on those tits I believe. Its good to see you are enjoying yourself. Add more to the profile, and keep up the good work.

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