by angel_in_disguise
Very well written, waiting for more of this story line!! Additional Chapters?? Thank you!
Here I was reading in a dark room scared as a kid under the covers, but unable to stop. That's what a story should be.
I've just read your story in the early hours of the morning and I've loved every minute of it - very well written. :)
Mirriam
Very wonderful story. I quite enjoyed reading it. May wish to go deeper into the thoughts of the girl, though. Readers love being able to feel the fear and insecurity and pleasure as their own. =P
By far the best story I've read on here.... Amazing!
Would love more chapters!
=D