All Comments on 'Between the Push and Pull Ch. 02'

Is it hot in here or what?

Holy shit...and more expletives I am too spent to remember!

Hell, I feel like Ryan!

Can you write faster, PLEASE?

We need another chapter.

Just give me a moment to catch my breath.......

The sign of a good writer is when a reader becomes invested in the characters of the story. This was so good I thought I was actually in the room (and wishing I was part of the action). Will you be releasing the video for us at some point?

Usually when i'm done reading a chapter of a story, i'm unsatiable. I look for more chapters and different stories, even visiting other sites to meet my demands.

After reading THIS, I feel like I want to go out, breathe fresh air, live.... I'm so satisfied. Overly satisfied. The word "bliss" is coming to mind, haha. I guess there really is truth in Erik's project about women wanting romance.

Please, take your tine writing the next one if it means more of this (just dont keep us waiting months)! I'm really looking forward to more of your work! You really show potential of becoming one of the Gay Erotica Greats in ny book <3

Wow is right. I totally agree with the last 3 comments. I felt I was part of the action. I agree with the whole concept--I like a story line and some romance along with the sex. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Just ... wow.

I wish this video really existed. I loved the little cues they gave each other. It makes me want to rewatch favorite scenes to see if I can catch them.

This is the hottest sex scene I have ever read, by a country mile! Your skill in writing this sex scene was stunning. How did you ever get through writing it without exploding yourself? . . . maybe you didn't.

You showed Erik and Ryan's chemistry to be the stuff of legends. and in doing so, you left my mind and body reeling.

Love the story, love the characters, still can't quite catch my breath.

It is fascinating how beautifully you have woven all aspects of this story, small details, rich descriptions, major themes together with grace, sensuality and a breathtaking economy of words.

From the porn scene to the bar scene to the restaurant scene to the dance scene to their first sex scene together . . . BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!

Ab

That was hot. Real hot.

That was very hot. The sexual tension and chemistry between these two is translated so we'll in your writing. Erick is such a little tease but I love it. Can't wait until the next chapter

U re an amazing writer.....u make stories come alive no matter de subject....thank you

This is soooo fucking good omfg please write more

Some of the best most erotic sex scenes I have ever read. Terrific story look forward to many more chapters.

Well chapter 2 exceeded all expectations. Dont move to fast there's so much to work with from this point. X

OMG!

OMG!

OMG.

The buildup of this scene is unbelievable!

You are a great writer! your imagination is delicious slow and on point -

and I think you must be good in bed, well, in theorie definitely.

I´m looking forward for more, much, much more...

I want to get fucked like that.

I need air to breathe too, I was involved with that

Hot! Love it!

Did you copy the introduction for this chapter from another site? Because for the life of me I can't figure out why readers here would have anything against porn. This site IS porn in itself, just a bit of a different kind. Some people prefer to watch, others get off better when their own imagination is involved, so they like the words better.

Alex