All Comments on 'Between the Push and Pull Ch. 05'

I don't think any story has ever gotten under my skin the way this one has. Very well done. Can't wait for the sequel to see what's in store for these characters!

Can't wait for the sequel!

Wow. You made me cry after this absolutely beautiful build-up!

I tried watching porn to see what everyone is so excited about. The only emotions I got out of it were: embarrassment, a bit of repulsion, confusion and boredom.

Most porn stars become empty and emotionally dead.

Why did Ryan do this? What is wrong with him?

dam why did you take this route. cant believe this is the way it will end. Eric need to go to Toronto and find Ryan and tell him it was for real . John

Nothing to add to the previous comments, but... wow. This blew me. I loved the whole story, so very well written, but this part was certainly the most intense. Please don't make us wait too long for the sequel.

Callie

Ok so this is the first time I've ever commented on a story here but I just had to put my two cents in. I really loved and hated(in a good way) this story. You managed to evoke the whole spectrum of emotions with this one. Please please please continue with the sequel and give us updates. And for the love of god if you decide to move to another platform let us know. Thanks! xoxo

I'm glad you stuck with your instincts and I agree that it had to end. Heart wrenching but life is like that sometimes. Beautifully done.

OMG. What an ending to an AMAZING story. The story had to end there and like that, I agree with the direction it took. Ryan had to heal, you cant start a forever happily ever after love story in a rocky headspace. Man, you write an amazing story, well done. Cant wait for more

This is a wonderful story, so well written and thought out. Mayby not the ending I would have liked but I'm glad you are considering a sequel which I hope will be as soon as possible.

What is it with men that can't or are afraid to communicate their feelings? You portrayed that sad fact very well. Men, we have to do something about that (me included). I challenge all dudes reading this to work on it, it will really make everybody a bit happier.

I loved this story from beginning to end and I agree with you as well as everybody else that it had to end the way it did. Ryan had to heal and hopefully once healed maybe he and Erik will have a chance at happiness. I hope you will continue their story cuz i definitely can't wait to read it and I'm sure everybody else feels the same. Amazing story and you're an amazing writer I love it :)

This is the type of shit that will literally end lives smh

In case anyone sees this, I just wanted to let everyone know that the Ryan and Erik's sequel is well underway!! It feels so good to be able to give them their happy ending and while they're not quite there yet, they're getting close!! Check out my author page for updates!! And as always, thanks for reading :)

HB

The Sequel Cannot come soon enough. !! This was a great read, until the last few paragraphs.. they HURT. Yeah, I'm an emotional reader. Your character development make Ryan and Erik REAL.. at least to this reader.

I did not comment earlier, your second chapter was full of real humor, a rare item in a porn story.. or porn-laced love story. That was very well done, thank you.

I will have to check often for the sequel to show up.

Thanks for the great story, wonderful characters, and the upcoming sequel.

DV19

It took me a while to read this story because I didn’t think I’d enjoy a story about to porn actors... turns out I need a day to recover from this story. So emotionally charged. I understand the ending but my poor heart needs a sequel ASAP. Gah.

From jasper getting toys stuffed in his ass, to the straight-laced priest, to the emotionally distraught porn star(s). This story was so good it put everything else in better perspective, if that makes any sense. It’s like seeing more sides of a person, but of an author.

The person (I assume it was a guy) who commented that your note at the end about a happy ever after having saved your life, made me laugh! That was a pretty rough ending. Glad the follow up has all already been written !

This was a truly EXCELLENT story!

I'm so happy there's a sequel, heart literally jumped in my throat when I realized this is the end. But it's not over yay! On to it then

I hated that ending!😒😧😫

Oh sigh. I’m really feeling this. Did they have to end this way, words unspoken, not taking the leap or faith needed. I’d say yes too. There could have been more between the two but the timing want right and at different places in life. I think education wise, Ryan would never have been in an even keel as he didn’t finish or knew what his life dreams were to be. I’d love to read about how they will work their way Back to each other. And in that last film scene, understood too the title and of the series. Can you find love, trust, and the honesty to reveal your true self, and live in the push and play. Do we live with the tension or work our way through it. Thank you