All Comments on 'Beverly Pt. 02'

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BruceWoBruceWoover 2 years ago

Thank you for this wonderful story. Wish you a happy Christmas too

TonyspencerTonyspencerover 2 years ago

A lovely romance, fun too. Thank you. Enjoy your Christmas with the grands and great grands.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story very much. However, I did note one glaring mistake. When Princess gave birth you indicated that if was a girl which is a filly. Latter, at least twice, you referred to the filly as a colt, which is a male. Regardless, I enjoyed your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your Family

pepepilotpepepilotover 2 years ago

A good story. Enjoy the family at this happy time of the year and I'm already looking forward to the new year's reading!

ArediaArediaover 2 years ago

A great and elegant finish, in your usual polished fashion. Bravo! and Thank-you. :)

dwoelfledwoelfleover 2 years ago

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Thank you for you wonderful stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Typical R410a story

Well written

Believable dialogue from believable charachters in believable situations

ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

Thank you for sharing your stories. I hope you have a great holiday season. Peace

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OK, I'M HOOKED! Thank you again for your time and talent. DMW.

PS. Just looked at your list of titles and am thoroughly impressed by all the scores. The lowest a 4.29? DAMN, I guess I have a lot of reading to do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are an amazing writer, Sure hope you write for a living because you're probably the best writer I've read on this site.

Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

mac1729mac1729over 2 years ago

Another wonderful story. Thank you

CUCK972CUCK972over 2 years ago

This was a very sweet story. I love the personal touch at the end about your kids, grandkids and great grands. I have nine great-grands and it is a blessing. See you next year

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitover 2 years ago

It’s nice to read about people who treat each other well, and not focused on the little BS issues that happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love all your stories

TheOldStudTheOldStudalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful, well thought-out story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome writer!!!

Whome1578Whome1578almost 2 years ago

Great story look forward to more of this series you did a good on it so far. 2 thumbs up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Have a great time. I can't wait to start readding your new stories. this one was so great that I'm giving you 12 stars. Hurry back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's getting so that I can't tell which story I like the best. Their all so great. Another 12 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What can I say. Another great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As expected, not only a great story, but a outstanding one. When you start writing again, they should up those stars the number of stars, because you don't get anything under 10 stars on all of your stories. This one was at least 11 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You keep doing this. Every time I read a new story it's better then the last one. Just keep them coming. This is another 10 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was one of greatest story I've ever read. Can't i wait till you publish your next one's. This is defiant 16 star.

MarrttyMarrtty3 months ago

Great story thanks.

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites19 days ago

I just love a good romance and this certainly qualifies. I WILL be reading more of your stuff as soon as possible. Keep writing. You're really good.

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