All Comments on 'Beyond Awakening: A New Foursome'

She’s 47. Had more cock then a porn star and yet has a “tight pussy”.

Bullshit.

She would have a gaping snatch you could fist. You want to write erotica, figure that out.

Whackadoodle, you are an idiot and clearly haven't dated women who exercise (look up Keagal exercises). I have only counted four men thus far who have had her pussy, so your porn star comment is equally stupid. Most of all, this is porn literature, not Nobel Prize shit. Why don't you write something and show us how it's done? Since you can't, just settle for not being a douche hater.

Didnt take long before it became clear this was another of the closeted male writers which are drowning us in a tsunami of total shit writing and total shit stories.

Few of you of name swapping "authors" are worth a damn as writers. Just throwing stupid, unrealistic shit together and claiming it a story really is ruining Literotica. Most of you seem to have never met a woman, understand a woman or a wife. Sure not all subjects are good ones, but if youre going to try then fucking try. Its called effort. So if pandering to the lowest common denominator here is your goal, you will not ever be a favored writer, just a hit with a small minority.

If you cant take the time and effort to write something of some type of substance, give it up.

I'm not sure if Whackadoodle knows how pussies work but he should try one sometime.

I don't understand the haters honestly. Are they expecting great literature on a porn site? There is a reason no porn movie has been nominated for an Academy Award, morons.

If your fantasy is having a slutwhore wife then this is obviously for you. The writer obviously has this fantasy or is living it.

We don't expect good literature, just bad porn. This author came through with that.

26thNC, you must like bad porn then - you've followed and commented on all my works :)

Star, I appreciate all the bad porn in LW, yours is not the worst available, but bad enough to get noticed.