Beyond Sight Ch. 02

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There was an audible click and a thunk that sounded to his left. Tomas turned and saw that a section of the bookshelf had opened and turned on its center, revealing a hidden passageway. Warily, Tomas turned the key back and pulled it out, walking over to the secret room carefully. Pulling out his phone, he activated the built-in torch, illuminating the small room beyond the shelves.

It was spacious enough to allow at least three people to stand behind it comfortably. With walls of concrete bricks, it was solid and uninterrupted except by a singular door built into the back wall. Approaching the door, Tomas gripped the knob and, finding it was unlocked, he opened it. It was pitch black inside and Tomas could barely see a thing, even with his light.

Feeling along the wall for a switch, he was rewarded by finding one on his left. Flipping it on, the lights in the area snapped on immediately, bathing the room in a bright white glow. What he saw then shocked Tomas to his core. Inside was a spacious laboratory, festooned with notebooks and textbooks on the shelves. There were a couple of desks, each with its own computer, and what seemed to be some sort of range or sparring area in the back.

Looking over what he saw, it left Tomas with a profound sense of wonder and puzzlement and he wondered aloud, "Dedushka, what have you been up to?"

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The plot thickens about Tomas and his emerging abilities! Don't worry, as there will be more to come soon, you can count on that! What will Tomas discover in the secret lab that is beneath his grandfather's house? What will become of Jessica, Vanessa and Sabrina? What game are Hugo and Rachel playing at? Who are the mysterious Council which they serve? For all of those details, you will have to wait until those chapters are released!

Anyway, thank you for taking the time to read my work and I hope that you've enjoyed it! I'm open to constructive criticism and will seriously consider any suggestions made about various story arcs. Please feel free to rate and comment on my work down below. If you like what I write, don't be afraid to follow and share, though your views, ratings and comments are quite enough for me.

In the meantime, this is C.H. Darkstrider, signing off to grab a beer and some quality time with the wife! ;) You will attain whatever you most desire, as long as you believe in yourself. Cheers!

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C.H. DarkstriderC.H. Darkstrider9 months agoAuthor

Hello everyone! I just wanted to say something to address the messages and emails I've been getting from my fans. I hear what you're all saying and I would love nothing more than to write out the stories you want most! Sadly, that isn't in the deck of cards at the moment.

The thing is, I'm what you call a 'working writer'. Someone who has a regular day job and responsibilities on top of crafting the stories that I write. The stories I do write are the ones that are my most popular stories and the ones that most folks want. Because I'm a working writer, my main 3 are the only ones I really have time for. Unless I happen to stumble across a hypertime watch or find a hyperbolic time chamber that I can use(lol), my time is limited.

It is unfortunate that I cannot write these additional stories, or amp up the production of my main stories, but that's how it is. After over 6 years of doing this, I only have about 22% of the support I need in order to take up writing full time. It's been a slow, uphill battle just to get this far and the way things are, it will be longer still. Barring some sort of miracle, the pace I have going will have to be the pace that things stay at. For now.

I hope you all understand where I'm coming from on this matter and that it's not an easy position to be in. I do look forward to the day where I can write full time, all day, every day. Here's hoping that day comes sooner rather than later. Cheers!

C. H. Darkstrider

docholliday0007docholliday0007over 1 year ago

Keep it up beautiful story can’t wait for the next installment

dapidapiover 1 year ago

Good start on the story. Mysteries upon mysteries. And a cliffhanger. I can just hear C.H. in a smarmy narrator's voice doing his spiel and finishing with "Tune in tomorrow—same Bat-time, same Bat-channel! For the exciting conclusion to this story."

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written, with just the edge of mystery always peeking out. Very curious to what Tomas and Olivia will be getting up to next.

RamazaRamazaover 1 year ago

Happy new year, I love it so far, it’s really good and are looking forward to the next chapter

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