All Comments on 'Beyond The Rim Ch. 02'

by DeepDarkErotica

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellant Sience Fiction - Thank You so much

Thanks DDE . I very much appreciate the story Beyond The Rim . The first two chapters are great . Very much looking forward to number Three . Possibly you could make three a longer one ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great start!

I like where you are going, thus far, and look forward to more in the future. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good

This is really good. I look forward to seeing more. :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Trite

This whole "the master" crap all these sci fi stories do is beyond lame.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Males don’t lay eggs

Ever. This is glaring error you may want to address.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Note to "Males don't lay eggs"

Having amply demonstrated that you failed all your biology classes, you might consider going back and taking them again.

puma0916@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Another note to "Males don't lay eggs"

What part of "Alien species" and "Science fiction" do you not get??? Nevermind biology class.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good story don’t know why some are hating on it

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