All Comments on 'Beyond the Scions Pt. 02'

Why even help a prick like him. I get it that she wants info on the suit and by the sound of it, they both have some type of addiction to it but after spending suck little time in it she should cut her losses and bail on him while filing a lawsuit on the military for doing what they did. They put her in danger, held her against her will, made her sign a paper without benefit of council and she is not in the military but an outside hire akin to a private contractor. I just don’t have any interest in this story. It is written well enough but it lacks anything of interest in the first couple of chapters.

I didn't know why I read it...the story just led me keeping me from falling asleep even when I really wanted to doze and then it led up to nowhere and the chapter is over...well fucking done...