by FriskyDingo626
The most disappointing part was at the finish where it said THE END.
You need to give us some more, or at least Patrick & Kevin
Very hot and sexy first story. Would like to see more of these characters.
(One helpful hint: Run your story through spellcheck before submitting; there were a few typos here and there.)
I love this story very much described all the feeling and emotion between the two men. If I was alone when I read this I probably would have got myself off just from your story. Very hot all 5 stars from me.
Joe
The part about two straight HS seniors fucking loudly while they know that a parent can hear in the kitchen ruins this story. There is no way that would happen - makes the whole tale unrealistic.
5 stars from me! Surprised the guys didn’t get busted by one of the parents but maybe you could work that into chapter 2? Patrick and Kevin can’t just be a single chapter! ?
OH MY FUCKING GOD. This story was so freaking hot. You hit it on the head with a sledgehammer. I’m not going to lie this story got me hard enough to smash a diamond. I really hope you continue with this awesome storyline. I have to give it 10 stars.
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I love these kind of stories!! I never was able to express my feelings when I felt a connection like this one. Wish I would have had this experience
WOW, this story was not only hot it also showed a tenderness at the end. I liked that, made it look more like the beginning of a permanent relationship rather than just casual sex. Looks like this was your first story on Literotica, well you hit the bullseye. Thanks, MLF
Wow! One of the best best-friends-finally-fuck stories I have ever read, Didn't need the last couple of lines tho... seems to forestall the possibility of a second installment, where the bottom is still not sure, and needs to be completely convinced. ;)
Sounds like my high school years great story consider adding a new chapter for us