by GeorginaX
I'm a male myself, and even I can tell you're a guy masquerading as a girl. On top of that, the writing is bad, and it's basically a stroke story. And not really a good one either. Plus it's the wrong category. It needs to be in fetish. I try not to discourage, but if you are to continue, please get an editor. It would help you tremendously.
Dewey Cheatham
STFU Dewey, no one asked you your worthless opinion. I liked it a lot. Keep it up! Can't wait to see more.
I actually enjoyed it. I hope to see a second chapter. I don't look for grammar or spelling mistake, I realized a long time ago I make mistakes and hope they are overlooked. Pappasleaze!