All Comments on 'Bi Brother Busted'

Enjoyed the story a lot and didn't have errors that pulled me out of the story.

I'd say the only down was it wasn't longer. Well done.

Nothing better than some bi play in a group !

What could be better?...Brother/sister incest and guys getting it on too! Loved it just wish it were longer and more mmf sessions.

Has potential. You cut the story too short. You could of gone into more details on how it felt, more brother sister sex, then a soft opening on the seducing of her bf. The mmf scee could of used more details especially describing her bf body her brothers body and her own. If yoh need help please reachout. I'd be happy to help you out. I actually have a few true stores on something similar.

Tasty story.