by Nakedcraving
I'm honestly not sure about this story. It lacked a bit in the 'erotic' part, sort of clinical, but hubby, even though he's allowing this is still being cucked.
Well written short story. It could have had a little more detail but stories are best without an endless repeat of sex scenes. The husband might have joined in but that would risk being a mirror of so many other stories. Personally, because I think this would be very hot, I would have wanted to watch. In fact I couldn't watch without wanting in on the action. What's so wrong with being chucked if you want to be?
It has all the makings of a good story but all the emotions are second hand and presumed. I think readers want to know how Claire felt as her face approached Marcie’s pussy. Was it everything she hoped for? How did it taste? Did she make Marcie cum? Eyc
Good story, but a loser is a loser, if you come second in your marriage to a man or a woman, you are still a loser, if that's your thing ok but don't whine when wife wants a divorce, on her terms.....