- Romance
- Bianhua Ch. 04
- Page 4
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Click here"In a way, I was," I replied. "A teaching of the master had come across my memory. I saw it in a new way and fully understood what he was trying to say."
"Shall we get out of the pond and let the ladies enjoy the space as we start to cook the steaks?" I suggested.
So that's what we did.
Part 5 in the works
- COMMENTS
Demosthenes384bcalmost 2 years agoWhile I agree with the subplot lessons in our place in the universe, it does take over the story at times. 4*
servant111over 2 years agoGets kind of thick on the zen mother earth stuff.... While that is nice...it gets kind of overbearing in this chapter and takes away from the story.
WhoGivesAShitover 3 years agoThis chapter has a plot hole. Dirk’s business involves environmentally sound waste treatment. So why would he burn the packing materials from his furniture and appliances? That doesn’t make sense.
larrys3dover 3 years agoI usually love your stuff. Love this one too, but you seriously need to either get a proof reader, or take a little more time. I could follow most sections where assumptions of the subject had to be made, but way too many times, I had to backtrack, due to small things that kept changing the flow. The story itself is great.
