by TrampsAnThieves
Need another chapter and have her sister move in with them permanently and he knocks both of them up.
3.5/5 overall (rounded up to 4)
Every event makes sense, as a story not that much. 28yo 2m widow getting horny and in a spur of a moment initiating sex with 18yo stepson, no indication of attraction or budding relationship (shared grief?) before? Sure, why not. This couple initiating graduation/ marriage/ kids discussion and smoothly moving to plan delivery right after orgasm? No way. Crazy pace and situations are perfectly OK in over the top humor story (I.e. well executed 'Blind girl's bluff, same author) but here either humor or background is missing